Success Criteria

Choose an ordinary place, object or thing

Give your subject praise or thanks

Speak directly to the object

Use descriptive vocabulary to bring the object to life- ( personification)  

Use repeated lines

An Ode To My Brain

                                            Brain

                                You are so smart

                                I love you for that

                       You work out maths problem

                           You're the boss of my body

                 Do you remember the time i shot that deer

                                 You're the best brain

                                              Thanks

                                                Brian

I like the way I thinking about the sentes and titell

I need to the full stops

   

                                      

Body parts

1.Knee/Turi

2.leg/foot/Waewae

3.Belly/ button/Pito

4.Finger/Mathikere

5.Hip/Hope

6.Arm/Hand/Ringa

7. Teeth/Niho

8.Eye/Karu

9.Ear/Taringa

12.Nose/lhu

13.Mouth/Waha

14.Stomach/puku

15.Chest/Poho/umg

16.chin/kauae

boby par

Yesterday we had to make some baby parts then we had to tap on to someone in our group when everything went well when the group had a job i would like to find out about the brain i do not know about the little cells in the brain

   

Goals for Term 2

I am going to stop I am going to stop losing focus in the class room

I am going to keep playing soccer I am going to keep my friends Making an effort at my maths

I am going to start I am going to start reading my books and my and doing my math homework

maths

Today in maths we used the Sieve of Eratosthenes to find all of the prime numbers upto 100. A prime number is a number that can only be multiplied by one and itself

i will die in space

 26th feb 2016

i was in the space ship going up to the moon i am going to walk on it i said and not were a marcs and die yay but it was be painful but worth THE END.

 

THE MOTORBIKE TRACK

The Motorbike Track

The dusty track is like a big foggy mess  in the sky.

The motorbike track is like that

The motorbikes smelling like oil.

And they are smashing into each other. 

We can hear big bangs and crash

The moto bike track is like that.

Walt: we are using our senses to write a poem
describing a special place.        

APOCALYPSE

                                      APOCALYPSE

The buildings lay old and rickety as slowly walked  into the chipped school

  The playground was old and the window was all moldy. The sand was all dutsy

and blowing like a tornado. 

we are learning to add detail t are writing

my dad is a bear

                            10.02.16

                      my dad is a big bear

                                                        

                      my dad is a big bear 

stepping down and roaring as he goes along he is the beast

 when he gets mad his hair prises up like a pufferfish

 and the best part is the yucky hair on his chests

with food all on it like fish and meat and it smalls

disgusting it makes me want to vomit.


I wrote about  some one that i like the mosts 
we hate to us some similarities in it aswell. 

My goal for this term

                                            Try sports and go hard  you can achieve anything if you put your mind to it go

                                             go for gold. So my goals are get more friends and try a new sport like tennis or                                                  
                                              tee ball. My goals are good try hard and you will get a good result.